The Marketing Professional to test new lead capture page.

This is a request to all of my marketing friends, please tell me which version of the lead capture page you think will work best, version A or version B and if the ad copy is whack then say so, I have thick skin and have been in the biz long enough not to cry, big thanks and see below plus leave your comment:

A:

Who Wants to be Coached, Trained and Mentored
by an International Success Strategist, Leader
and Marketing Professional?

Fellow Success Seeker,

“Success” is defined differently by each of us.

What is it YOU want to be successful at?

a. Getting Money b. Making Friends c. Improving Your Lifestyle

I want to give YOU exactly what YOU want and share with YOU the most valuable treasure that anyone can posses!

(insert e-mail address box with “Get Valuable TREASURE!” button)

By providing your e-mail address you are taking the next step on the path to the journey to your success.

Your first steps already brought you here (to this page) so keep the momentum going – take the next step and meet “The Marketing Professional” learn how he can help YOU right now!

B:

Who Wants to be Coached, Trained and Mentored
by an International Success Strategist, Leader
and Marketing Professional?

Fellow Success Seeker, (insert e-mail address box with “Get Valuable TREASURE!” button)

“Success” is defined differently by each of us.                                                                                                                                                                                        
What is it YOU want to be successful at?

a. Getting Money b. Making Friends c. Improving Your Lifestyle

I want to give YOU exactly what YOU want and share with YOU the most valuable treasure that anyone can posses!

By providing your e-mail address you are taking the next step on the path to the journey to your success.

Your first steps already brought you here (to this page) so keep the momentum going – take the next step and meet “The Marketing Professional” learn how he can help YOU right now!

(insert e-mail address box with “Get Valuable TREASURE!” button)

So, there you have it – what do you think and feel when you view the two versions?  Leave your comments and thank you,

Mark “The Marketing Professional” Brown